Bring me up and tear me down.

These are the poems I wrote for English late last year. They are included in list of four best works. I only have three so far though.

What is wrong with me
I can't leave all this behind
I wish that I could
It comes back everyday now
Haunting me with it's shadows.


It's not finished yet
He's putting it together
Please wait for the end
As long I still want her
I will say I am sorry


The thought's clouding his mind
the moon eclipsed the sun

The memory slowly faded
A rock sinking in the ocean

the anger burnt inside him
a pitcher starts to overflow

(those were just exercises earlier and I don't like them as much.)


It's too much to take
It will all be gone soon now
I want you to stay


When it all come down
I will still be here for you
I will always care


The darkness consumes
en wraps all in its cold hand
separating all


So where are you now
I hope you're in pain right now
Yet I want you glad
Happy happy happiness
be glad because I love you
(last two lines courtesy of Bailey, marked red)


What would you say if
i told you my feelings for you
If only you knew
I wish I could tell you that
I love you but I am scared
Please don't be afraid
Just tell me how you really feel
We can be happy
Because I will tell you too,
I feel the same about you.



I feel horrible
I can't bring myself to ask
I'm just not able
It's not a hard task
Just a few words and it's done
I can't take this mask
I'm not having fun
What the hell is wrong with me
shoot me with a gun
I do, believe me
I guess I'm just a coward
Fill me up with glee
Just push me forward
I'm so close to telling you
I'm going toward
my dreams that involve just you
Just please tell me what to do

Kory-
Nicely done! I like it; you poems are so conflicting sounding -- is it real, or just a tone you're taking on?


I got 50/50 on this.